Story Collage Critique

I appreciated all the advice on my Story Collage. It was helpful to see how others interpreted my story. I liked the complements, because who wouldn't! The feedback I got from my peers were that I used anthropomorphic, geometric, and organic shapes well and that they could tell what the story was but it was somewhat confusing. It was helpful to see that the mountains could look like pyramids. Carly said she liked how it was 3D! The best advice I got was when people said that the story was confusing. It made me think that next time I can be more clear. I appreciated the critiques.